Redação Oficial – Concisão | Escreva com Precisão e Eficiência!

Hey everyone! Let's get to the point then. Here we have another attribute, which is conciseness. Let's take a look at this, okay? According to the writing manual of the Presidency of the Republic, what is conciseness? Let's analyze it here. Conciseness , this phrase is very important, is more a quality than a characteristic

of the official text. Concise text is that which manages to convey the maximum amount of information with the minimum number of words . What attribute is defined as the transmission of the maximum amount of information with the minimum number of words ? Conciseness. You'll see this directly in the questions, okay? Let's pay close

attention to that. Excellent. It should in no way be understood as an economy of thought. And there is a statement: conciseness is an attribute that refers to economy of thought. No, it's not economy of thought, nor linguistic economy , it's economy of words. That's it, remember? Okay. In other words, substantial passages of the text should not be removed

for the sole purpose of reducing its size. Ah, it's very long, let's cut these three paragraphs from here. No, calm down. Sometimes those paragraphs contain crucial information, right? So, it's not simply about reducing the size of the text, but about observing precisely the following: it's exclusively about excluding useless words, redundancies, passages that add nothing to what has already been

said. That's conciseness. Okay? Brilliant. Irrelevant details are dispensable. I put it in bold, it's not for nothing, okay? The text should avoid superfluous characterizations and comments, useless adjectives and adverbs , and excessive subordination. So, you're going to remove anything that's excessive. This is the idea of conciseness. Excellent. Good. Now I'm going to